write a letter to an organizer about the hotel you stayed who booked the hotel for you
meeting details
What you did not like about the hotel
what you want organizer to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about the condition of the hotel, where I stayed for an urgent meeting. My company sent me to turkey for settlement of a project.The meeting was on 23rd of October at the Turkey hotel. I stayed in the Turkey hotel from 22nd to 24th of October in Room number 406.
Firstly, The Room was quite spacious and after the meeting, I was so tired that wanted to sleep immediately. But when I switched on the air-conditioner it was not working properly. I had to open the window so that some fresh air can reduce the heat in the room. Secondly, The Refrigerator was also not working at proper temperature and all the drinks were hot. Finally, It looked like bed sheets were also not charged after the previous tenant as there were spots on them.
This was extremely frustrating, however I complained about the situation to the hotel manager, But to no avail. As hotel arrangement were not according to my requirements and service was really pathetic, hence I want you to refund half of my money and also report about hotel condition to its owner. So that other people do not face the same issues in the future.
I want you to send the money in my bank account.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d for an urgent meeting. My company sent me to turkey for settlement of a project...
^^
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...e to turkey for settlement of a project.The meeting was on 23rd of October at the T...
^^^
Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ort about hotel condition to its owner. So that other people do not face the same issue...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, look, really, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61187214612 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62121138986 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584474885845 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4839492518 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1666666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223110834557 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696772288648 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746440741019 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144799105881 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765192572571 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.