write a letter to an organizer about the hotel you stayed who booked the hotel for you
meeting details
What you did not like about the hotel
what you want organizer to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about the condition of the hotel, where I stayed for an urgent meeting.
You are a prestigious agent and i always rely on your choice with regard to hotel and travel arrangements. My company has been working on a project for some time for an important client. The Project had a lot of technicalities and our customer had some difficulties to run it smoothly. Therefore, in order to solve the issue, I went turkey to guide the client in respect of converting the project into the process. The meeting was on 23rd of October at the Turkey hotel. I stayed there from the evening of 22nd to morning of 24th of October in Room number 406.
The Room was quite spacious and after the meeting, i was so tired that wanted to sleep immediately. But when i switched on the air-conditioner it was not working properly. I had to open the window, so that some fresh air can reduce the heat in the room. The Refrigerator was also not working at proper temperature and all the drinks were hot. It looked like bed sheets were also not charged after the previous tenant as there were spots on them.
This was extremely frustrating, and I complained about the situation to the hotel manager, But to no avail. As hotel arrangement were not according to my requirements and service was really pathetic, hence I want you to refund half of my money and also report about hotel condition to its owner. So that other people do not face the same issues in the future.
I want you to send the money in my bank account.
Yours faithfully,
SAIRA
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-11-12 | Ankita7443 | 78 | view |
| 2019-07-19 | learnafren | 89 | view |
| 2019-07-17 | Saira Faiz | 84 | view |
| 2019-07-17 | Saira Faiz | 78 | view |
| 2019-07-17 | Saira Faiz | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 52, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s quite spacious and after the meeting, i was so tired that wanted to sleep immed...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t wanted to sleep immediately. But when i switched on the air-conditioner it was ...
^
Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ort about hotel condition to its owner. So that other people do not face the same issue...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, really, so, therefore, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 283.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54770318021 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65222535656 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558303886926 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0631659372 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7058823529 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23028233084 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632846150126 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721459332386 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151609013671 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808879971432 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.