Write a letter to a restaurant manager to organise a party.
-Why you want to give the party?
-What special arrangements you will need?
- Any relevant question.
Dear Sir/ Ma’am,
I am Ahmed Karem; I am one of your frequent clients. I am writing to you because I have a special occasion for my son.
Firstly, it will be a birthday party. My son Omar has become 18 years old, and as you know this is an important age for adult; He is become a man. Therefore, I need to arrange a special party for him.
Secondly, I would like to ask you to arrange some things for this party. I need a big cake with his photo; Furthermore, if you can arranged variety of foods, it would be better.
Finally, I want know how much it will cost? If the number of the gust will be 20 persons; the date of the party on 7th May.
I look forward to hearing from you; should you require any further information, you will contact me. Here it is my contact number: 5557766. Thanks in advance.
Faithfully,
Ahmed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'arrange'
Suggestion: arrange
...with his photo; Furthermore, if you can arranged variety of foods, it would be better. ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Thanks in advance. Faithfully, Ahmed
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 679.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27044025157 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39978111682 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647798742138 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5578862413 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.5833333333 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284747169724 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877557470933 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804454622718 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145430303521 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300983885897 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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