Write a letter to the television channel Manager about boring programs during the day time. Tell him about the programs, give suggestions.
Dear Sir,
This is to inform you that nowadays the program on your channel is so dull and boring. Being a well-wisher and a loyal viewer of your “Infinity” channel for years, I really appreciate all the programs till the last month. Of all channels, your channel has been the most substantial.
Earlier in the afternoon there used to be a lot of chat shows and comedy shows which many used to enjoy. But now you started serials which are boring and most of them are unrealistic to believe, even the stories drag, day after day.
Afternoon is the time when children are home from school. Your talk shows provided a lot of knowledge and the comedy shows provided a lot of laughter to them. I, therefore, request you to revert to your earlier shows or we shall have to begin our search for an alternative.
I hope for a positive response from you regarding this matter.
Yours faithfully,
RK
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, regarding, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56612548407 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7678011959 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0929271405721 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368279256427 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409577293156 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0497157974902 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481382907757 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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