write a letter to your friend to ask for help about a new job you have been placed to. your friend is doing the same job in another company. Write a letter and it should contain the following:
1) What is the problem?
2) How your friend can solve it?
3) Meeting arrangement and details
Dear Daniel,
I hope you are doing fine. I wouldn’t have written to you like this, but my new job is bothering me and you are the only one who can chalk out an option.
I have been working for CPCL Law department and during the recent board meeting the company head had shared a problem about laying off a new employee. We have not been able to come up with an effective plan to lay him off, as we suspect that he will approach the court.
I was having a word with Joseph and he shared that you had encountered a very similar problem and you were able to get an effective order from the court. I need you to help me by figuring a way to terminate the contract without any legal hurdle and saving us money.
Further, I would like to meet you to discuss the issue in detail. I will be coming over on Sunday at around 12:30 PM. I will bring along the copy of the contract and other requisite documents, just in case.
I look forward to meeting you and getting past this hurdle.
Take care
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Daniel, I hope you are doing fine. I wouldn&apos...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ly one who can chalk out an option. I have been working for CPCL Law departme...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... requisite documents, just in case. I look forward to meeting you and getting...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27835051546 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21349593336 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664948453608 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2287782933 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4545454545 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14311222088 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486600457147 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399655572239 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760385176414 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369347138419 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.