Write a letter to your friend stating that you have moved to a new city. In you letter you say followingWhy you moved to new cityDescribe the place you are livingInvite your friend to come and see youStart your letteras Dear Anna.....and you don't need to

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Write a letter to your friend stating that you have moved to a new city. In you letter you say following

Why you moved to new city
Describe the place you are living
Invite your friend to come and see you

Start your letteras Dear Anna.....and you don't need to write your address.

Dear Anna,

I am writing to inform you that, I have moved with family to Bangalore. My organization has started a new branch in Bangalore and I have been appointed as branch in charge. I am glad that this transfer with promotion and I am very excited to share with you this good news with you.

The place where I am living in Bangalore is called, Jallahalli. This small beautiful town is just 10 Kms away from Bangalore city railway station and airport. It is very easy to commute from the railway station and airport since the Bangalore metro connectivity is available.

I would love to invite you to my new residence in your upcoming summer holidays. It would be great if you could make it as there are plenty of places to see in this city. We would certainly have a pleasurable time with our family. I am hoping you will be able to come in this vacation.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Your friend,

Ragesh

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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5325443787 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49997023896 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603550295858 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8760899139 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.8333333333 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0833333333 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320022815478 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12410794028 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950181874379 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171316144549 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100520062197 0.0580467560999 173% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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