Write a letter to your manager about your work from the last year. Include
What you did
What you think you could improve
A training request
I am writing this letter to tell you briefly about work since 2020 until now. As you know my tasks as an interior designer is to work visually and on site, addition to the material choices.
Last March, you landed me a project for the Dome that is located in the heart of Beirut. All 2D drawings such as plans sections, elevations and detail drawing were done on time which was on last June. Continuing with the photoshop render and the 3D rendering that took a lot of time, but I managed to finish it before the deadline thanks to your help. In September 2020, I went on site with you and Mr.John to choose the write materials needed in order to begin our work.
After several visits, I found that I need some improvement in the way of choosing materials and combining colors together. I was thinking of attending the “Material and Color Training” on the 28th of June 2021 that is taking place in Paris, France.
In this way I can visualize things more clearly and mix colors together in addition to choosing the right material that is suitable.
Thank you for your consideration and time. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: John
...er 2020, I went on site with you and Mr.John to choose the write materials needed in...
^^^^
Line 2, column 417, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... on site with you and Mr.John to choose the write materials needed in order to begin our ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, look, so, in addition, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6213592233 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4624429382 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650485436893 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5789075801 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5454545455 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273304679037 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971034721005 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078532939316 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145727691292 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106244947978 0.0580467560999 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.