Writing task 1 (a letter)
Write a letter to your friend who lives in a different country about your plan to work overseas. In your letter say
– What jobs do you plan to do?
– Why do you want to work overseas?
– Ask for some information related to jobs, such as salary, working hours and so on.
Dear Bro
How are you? Hope you enjoy your life with Aussies. I am in the cloud nine as got a high score in the language test and planning to fly to join with you all.
Actually, it's my long cherished dream to get a well paid job in country like Australia. As I am a techno-savvy, I can handle any work in offices and hope to get a good job as technical assistant. As you know, I have got good experience as special educator, language trainer and a student counselor. So I hope I will not struggle to hunt job overseas.
Many of my friends encouraged me from migration as we miss our quality time with family, although I have to take this as challenge since I haven't got a own even after five years of my marital life. Even many of family members and other acquaintance either blame me or promote me to find a job which will meet my urgent needs at least for short term period. So I decided to spare up to five years on migration.
Anyway, it is you who has got chance to work in Australia from our fried circle and I guess you might know about the job opportunities there. Please share me about different options which are applicable for my qualifications and skills. Please tell me about the payments and how long we have to work in a day and week.
Hope we will find a good time together there sooner.
Lovely
Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Bro Hope you are doing great with Aussies an...
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Line 13, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a house from day-job at home country. Can you tell me about different options ...
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Line 25, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dreaming to fly over there. Lovely Smith
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46448087432 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3752332741 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628415300546 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9185034333 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2727272727 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254977736095 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084064391601 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581456998749 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131130782804 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056316860357 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.