You and your family are moving to another country and looking for rent accommodation. Write a letter to property agent.
. introduce yourself and your family
. describe a type of accommodation.
.give your preference for location
Dear Sir,
I am writing to rent an apartment, as me and my family are soon going to shift from Jeddah, Saudi Arabia to Toronto, Canada.
I am housewife with a baby and my husband recently got the residence permit through Canadian express entry. Since, we are a small family so I just want a small apartment with two bedrooms, two bathrooms, a kitchen and a T.V. lounge. Also, it will be good, if we can have a flat with balcony and car parking area. At the entrance of house, I would like to have a walk-in closet.
As, my husband office is in the main city, therefore I would like to have a house near his office. However, it should be somewhere that is not much crowded and noisy, as my baby can't sleep in noisy places. It will be a plus if you could arrange it near any park, so that I can stroll with my baby in day time. I hope you will consider my requirements and we can get the apartment according to our needs.
Your sincerely,
Michael James.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... not much crowded and noisy, as my baby cant sleep in noisy places. It will be a plu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25683060109 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36209731333 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628415300546 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4358928117 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0672843014647 0.216113520407 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303663997571 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441390223004 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0421473184635 0.12726935374 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316185461851 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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