You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• describe the problems
• what you would like him/her to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express the inconvenience faced by me and my family. My name is Abhishek Saxena, and I am the new tenant of your apartment on the fourth floor of RMZ's tower B.
Let me explain to you the situation, there are two main problems which require a fix or replacement. Firstly, the main inlet water pipe has a leak, which causes the loss of water and as a result, it is adversely affecting the water bill. Secondly, a couple of modular cabinets in the kitchen are damaged consequently, insects breed there and broken hinges creak.
I shall be grateful to you if you can address these issues since the contract restricts me to carry out such repair work. Quintessentially the landlord resolves such issues, therefore I need your assistance in arranging a plumber and a carpenter. Also, I am ready to bear any additional expenses.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Abhishek Saxena
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88343558282 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89452247852 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693251533742 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2436571781 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 4.34317383033 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196568951494 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722344904276 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056558047344 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113790498264 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409165236023 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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