You are attending a night course in the school. you are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this.
In your letter, you should tell:
what course you are studying
what things you are not happy about
what you expect from the school director.
Dear Director,
I am writing to inform you, that I am attending a night course and I am not satisfied whit it, since I’m facing several difficulties.
It is my second year at this academy and my first night course. The course is a major subject of 6 credits per semester, it’s a prerequisite for the final project course, it requires to have 2 lectures and 2 tutorials each week.
I am facing some problems to finish my assessments on time, as you can know from my tutor, that I work at late nights to pay my school fees and rent since I live alone. This course needs to give it more time, to catch up with all the homework and lectures.
I would like from your side, if the school can postpone this course for summer, where I’ll have more free time to study it without pressure and workload.
I look forward to hearing from you, hope we can find a good solution together.
Sincerely Yours,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Director, I am writing to inform you, that I am at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62275449102 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49034134063 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658682634731 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8947857269 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.285714286 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238323504549 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871570310813 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537341316086 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121526301299 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407240841744 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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