You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can start
Dear Manager,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the delay in my joining. I got interviewed last month and received my offer letter on 27th of August with joining date 1st of September. I am about to join in as a senior consultant in your project and glad to fill this position with my experience. However, due to some unforeseen reason, I won't be able to report on the mentioned joining date.
I am currently working with ABC company and I am the senior-most person here. Because of some urgent delivery requirement from the client's end, my present manager has requested me to stay here a bit longer than the actual notice period which is of 90 days. Although I have resigned from my position way back, immediately after receiving an offer letter from your side. Still, I feel a sense of responsibility towards my current role and company. I hope you could consider my responsibility towards my present employer as well as the client. Therefore, will allow me to extend the notice period.
I would be very grateful if you could postpone my joining by 2 weeks that is, 16th of September. Furthermore, I would like to apologize here for the inconvenience it may cause. But I promise to show the same level of honesty and loyalty after joining your company.
Your's faithfully,
Monika Goswami
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ust with joining date 1st of September. I am about to join in as a senior consult...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75109170306 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76053691561 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628820960699 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8713133122 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7142857143 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1878826675 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644453512721 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496482315425 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124769920039 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203465794402 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.