You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Williams,
Firstly, my hearty congratulations for your tremendous achievement of obtaining the master's degree and setting me an example as how to balance studies while working.
I take profound pleasure in informing you that I got an admit for full-time at San Jose State University, USA for Master's in Software Engineering. It is a two-year course with almost all of the classes scheduled in the evening.
I aim to do a part-time job in the same field so that I can get myself exposed to the real-world experience of my curriculum and try to get some hands-on knowledge. In addition, this will help me to get some money that I can use for my accommodation and miscellaneous expenses.
I will appreciate if you provide me some references of the people whom you know in this field. Also, it will be helpful if you can give me some ideas on how to prepare for the interviews and get through them.
Looking forward in meeting you soon.
Your buddy,
Alan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Williams, Firstly, my hearty congratulations for y...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nd pleasure in informing you that I got an admit for full-time at San Jose State Univers...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ng. It is a two-year course with almost all of the classes scheduled in the evening. I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, so, while, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77514792899 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90863162851 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639053254438 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4583314947 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269030380534 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109306031384 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593137855625 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133324453902 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527153331044 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.