You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
– say where you are going
– describe your house
– explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house.
Hey David,
How are you doing? It is been long time since we met in our favourite sports bar for couple of drinks. Those football matches we watched together is sweet memories now. Anyways, Thanks for accepting my request to look after the apartment during my absence.
I will be out of town from Monday 22nd April and will be back on 26th April as I need to attend seminar followed by an important business meeting in Somerset town. This meeting is of prime importance and I will be occupied most of the time.
Since you haven't visited my new rented apartment, let me give you a brief idea about my place. My house is located on 2nd street in BBC community. As you enter from north entrance gate of community drive straight and take 2nd left. You 'll see my house on the right hand side.
As you enter the house, you 'll find living room and kitchen on left and bedroom on the right hand side. There is also backyard and small pool.
Do take care of my fishes, they are used to eat twice in a day, so feeding them in morning and evening is fine. among other things, kindly drain the pool water and refill it before planning to swim.
Thanks for your support.
Yours Truly,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...occupied most of the time. Since you havent visited my new rented apartment, let me...
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Line 10, column 37, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to eating'.
Suggestion: used to eating
... Do take care of my fishes, they are used to eat twice in a day, so feeding them in morn...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Among
...ng them in morning and evening is fine. among other things, kindly drain the pool wat...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42081447964 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10137032746 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674208144796 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4466647994 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0625 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8125 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20202409121 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687267731489 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652765298751 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950664355049 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653337419701 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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