You are going to take a vacation soon and want your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend asking him/her to come with you. In your letter, you should:
-Tell him/her why you want the holiday/vacation
-Describe your plan
-Invite him/her to go with you.
Dear Abhishek,
I hope you are doing well. It's been almost two years, and we haven't planned any vacation together due to the post-Covid world. However, the pandemic of coronavirus has been eliminated with the help of antidotes supplied across the world, and our government permitted domestic traveling in our country. So, I'm writing today to request you to visit Himachal Pradesh to see mountains and beautiful valleys with me.
I had been planning a place in Himachal which is known as Jibhi Valley, a remarkable place with the exquisite beauty of nature. You are the best travel companion as our all holidays have been an amazing experience and with lots of fun and joy. I can think only of you as my travel companion, and for this reason, I want you to join me on this trip to Jibhi.
Let me give you the brief details of the vacation. We will be staying in a camp during our entire holiday, and it includes various activities like born fire, music, drinks, trekking, dancing, and other mountain climbing. Since we both like to do adventure sports, it will be the best holiday to experience after almost two years of getting out of our cities.
I am open to your recommendations about the desired activities you want to do on the trip if you would like to join me. I hope you will not turn my offer down for this lovely holiday which will be for the coming last three days of the week.
Regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...well. Its been almost two years, and we havent planned any vacation together due to th...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... domestic traveling in our country. So, Im writing today to request you to visit H...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61811023622 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49358094633 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0736339221 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.75 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231606091702 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829032760446 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644348826613 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143874746459 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590022064125 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.