You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe what went wrong with the meal and service
suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear,...
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Manager,
The reason why I am writing this letter is because of the last time that I went to your restaurant was not satisfactory like before and I did not enjoy the meal that your employers prepared to me and my friends.
First of all, when I have arrived at the restaurant I requested a table for 5 people and the guy who works in the reception said that the restaurant was full and it would take around 10 minutes to someone pay the bill and find some available place for I can have a seat. After 50 minutes he called me and asked to me seat outside of the restaurant for I can have my dinner. However, it was not the biggest problem as we had a beautiful view from our table.
Secondly, the worst problem was when your waitress brought my meal and I found a piece of glass inside my food and I almost ingest that piece which I could go directly to the hospital if I did not see it in my dish.
In conclusion, this kind of situation is extremely unacceptable and you need to talk with your employers and find some way to this do not occur frequently.
Yours sincerely,
Igor Falcao
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...The reason why I am writing this letter is because of the last time that I went to your re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3014354067 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44530845408 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588516746411 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7707766915 44.8134815571 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.428571429 76.5299724578 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 16.8248392259 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 4.34317383033 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207884797454 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812273970984 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641449376026 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115400793772 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760662546967 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.