You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early.
Write a letter to the agency. In your letter
introduce yourself
ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes
explain why you need to break the contract.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is manveer singh parmar. I am living in Scott hill apartment No 101 which I rented from your agency. I am writing this letter to request to terminate my contract 2 month early from maturity date.
I rented out flat from your company 9 months ago. Initially our contract term is that I have to stay in apartment for one year but due to some uncontrolled circumstances I want to leave 2 months earlier than the contract date. Which means that next month would be my last month of stay.
As you can also read on contract form that I am working in Multinational IT comapny as software engineer in Vancouver office. Our comapny also has a office in Toronto where they have vacancy of manager in IT department and my company want me to join that position. The joining date is 15th November and in order to be there I have to leave next month. I am very exited for my new position and also exited to be in new city. But in order to fulfill my professional demand I have to breach my contract with out 2 months earlier.
The things are not in my hand but I really enjoyed y stay in your apartment. Hope you will understand my situation and will allow me to leave
Your sincerely
Manveer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/ Madam, My name is manveer singh parmar. I am li...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...r to request to terminate my contract 2 month early from maturity date. I rented o...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ct 2 month early from maturity date. I rented out flat from your company 9 mon...
^
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... months earlier than the contract date. Which means that next month would be my last ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... Vancouver office. Our comapny also has a office in Toronto where they have vacan...
^
Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce in Toronto where they have vacancy of manager in IT department and my company...
^^
Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o where they have vacancy of manager in IT department and my company want me to ...
^^
Line 7, column 504, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...nal demand I have to breach my contract with out 2 months earlier. The things are not...
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Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my situation and will allow me to leave Your sincerely Manveer
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38325991189 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48376904266 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559471365639 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.119238983 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5384615385 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231956642975 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855187190408 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697719986697 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144283752312 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557650988742 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.