You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early.
Write a letter to the agency. In your letter
introduce yourself
ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes
explain why you need to break the contract.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Tolegen and I am one of your tenants. I have been happily hiring your flat for over 10 months. I am writing to inform you that I need to abruptly terminate my renting agreement.
The reason is associated with the purchase of my own home. My wife and I have recently decided that we should have a bigger apartment, because we found out that she is pregnant. On top of that our children need two separate rooms so that they do not disturb each other while doing homework. Therefore, we want to cease our contract before it is finished. It would allow us to pay the down payment.
I know that it was not part of your plan, but I beg you to understand our situation and meet us halfway. I look forward to your reply as soon as possible since it is necessary for us to arrange our leave.
Yours sincerely,
Tolegen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, while, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38607594937 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4511654014 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8111548645 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202074976245 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700675489692 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557164894419 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132615049519 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073734292266 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.