You are studying for qualification and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
-ask for sometime of the computer qualification
-just what you Will do later at work if you have time or
-say how the qualification helps your job your company
Dear Sir
I am employer of your bank. The purpose of mind to penning down this epistle is to request you give me some extra time for study. So I will complete my qualification.
As you know the bank schedule is much busy, there are lots of burden to employers and workers are Delhi come in bank at 10 AM to 4 PM. In that time I was also busy in bank work and abreast I doing my study in generation. I do not give time for study. I would be grateful if you appreciate with me and give me one hour for study in bank work in time. If you give to me 3 PM to 4 PM (one hour) that is sufficient for me after studying. I will give extra one hour for bank work. Because this study is very potent for me and my future and predications helps to me for promotion because, I am in commerce stream, even completed my study, maybe any company. To me for a job. I would be more grateful if you give time to me for study.
Yours faithfully 22nd febraury2018
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... So I will complete my qualification. As you know the bank schedule is much bu...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
... was also busy in bank work and abreast I doing my study in generation. I do not ...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ime to me for study. Yours faithfully 22nd febraury2018 Aman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.01570680628 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38023623189 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528795811518 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7618622972 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.0 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282934344418 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123619770589 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595217542366 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17910802779 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792267499819 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.44 8.71597938144 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.