You are studying for qualification and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
-ask for sometime of the computer qualification
-just what you Will do later at work if you have time or
-say how the qualification helps your job your company
Dear sir
I am employer at your esteemed company who works as a web designer from last two years. The purpose of mine to penning down this epistle is to request you to consent me the leave for two days.
I am learning 'Advance java' language from a training centre and now, it is the last part of my learning in which I have to submit the project. Unfortunately, I have not yet complete my project work. Due to this reason, I request you for some time off from work. So, I can able to complete the whole project work and submit it, on the time. I assure you, if you give me grant then I will do extra time in the office. Moreover, I can complete all my pending tasks in the extra time.
It is beneficial for me as well as the company growth. In this training, I learnt a lot of things about making a website more eye catching and portable. With the help it, we can able to acquire the breakthroughs in the future in the field of information technology.
I would be very grateful if you give me the leave for two days. I am look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully 22ndFebruary2018
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to request you to consent me the leave for two days. I am learning Advance j...
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Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to advance'
Suggestion: To advance
...e leave for two days. I am learning Advance java language from a training centre an...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you. Yours faithfully 22ndFebruary2018 Aman
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urs faithfully 22ndFebruary2018 Aman
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30476190476 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54144779921 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9932909276 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.5714285714 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321940870293 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109865357726 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859743626123 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152658313292 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904404164261 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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