You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,
say what the problem is
describe the accommodation you thought you were getting
ask the provider to solve the problem
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to bring your kind attention to some difficulties currently I am facing at my staying in the hostel.
I have been given a shared room where three other students are already living and they are doing a different course. It has become tough for me to concentrate on my studies because my roommates make noise and arrange small party in there very often.
As I am here for a short practical course on genetic engineering I believed I would be provided a single room in a calm environment for the betterment of my studies. Even I was informed from my institution that accommodation will be arranged as per my preferences.
If the condition going like this, I will fail to achieve my goals. In this regards, my humble request to you please take immediate measures for shifting me to a single bed room.
Will look forward to hearing from you very soon.
Yours faithfully,
Md. Shawan Shahriar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 71, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...is, I will fail to achieve my goals. In this regards, my humble request to you pleas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79137959269 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703703703704 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9085374077 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917580491924 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376959052055 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027465725019 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0412673293337 0.12726935374 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278458452197 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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