You are unable to attend to your friend's wedding in Britain. In this letter
Tell her what you think about her wedding plan
Apologize for not attending
Suggest date for future meeting.
Dear Elly,
Hi! How are you? I am writing to inform you that I won’t be able to join you in your wedding on 12 Nov due to some unavoidable circumstances.
I had made all the arrangements to visit you in Leeds and was about to book the ticket, then suddenly I received a call from my manager and he informed me about the business meet where I have to give presentation about newly launched product of my company to the stake holders. As my promotion is due as well as no other employee was senior than me in my team, I am bound to attend the meeting.
I am extremely sorry for not participating in your wedding ceremony. I know that I am going to miss the lifetime event of my best friend and this day will not come back.
Why don't we meet on New Year and celebrate it together? I will have several holidays from Christmas to New Year, if you can have free time then I will book ticket to the Leeds.
Do let me know about your views on this and once again I am really sorry for not being part of your marriage.
Yours lovingly,
Patrick Smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... and this day will not come back. Why dont we meet on New Year and celebrate it to...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, then, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24630541872 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45618747253 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615763546798 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.452575933 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213971787207 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835006711187 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580035318852 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117311509136 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547638424308 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.37 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.