You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter.
1. explain where you live
2. describe the problem
3. give reasons why you do not want this development
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing regarding the airport's new extensions, and the increasing number of flights.
I am a resident of Nuzha street which is located next to the airport. I have been living here since 2009 with my entire family. this is our own apartment; hence, we cannot easily move elsewhere.
The problem is that the new expansion of the airport will not only leads to an increasing number of flights but will also raise the number of visitors which will increase the number of vehciles in the area.
The sequences of such expansion will negatively effect the area residents. The increasing number of flights will cause significant increase in the noise levels. Additionally, if the government did not provide enough parking space at the airport, our street will be terribly get crowded. As a sequance, the air pollution will significantly increase.
I hope that this matter could be considered promptly.
Yours faithfully,
Sara Eltantawy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding the airports new ...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t which is located next to the airport. I have been living here since 2009 with m...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... here since 2009 with my entire family. this is our own apartment; hence, we cannot ...
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Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
... expansion of the airport will not only leads to an increasing number of flights but ...
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Line 11, column 49, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ences of such expansion will negatively effect the area residents. The increasing numb...
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Line 11, column 76, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l negatively effect the area residents. The increasing number of flights will cause...
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Line 17, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...idered promptly. Yours faithfully, Sara Eltantawy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16455696203 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.791254052 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4221702885 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1818181818 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118712517966 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438076660659 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421720919725 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608779490871 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442938116952 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.