You are working a company. You need to take some time off and want to ask your manager about this.
Explain why you want to take off from work
Give details of the amount of time you need
Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear John,
I am Manjusha C Nair, and I am writing this letter to you requesting for few days off from work on a priority basis.
As you are aware that I am doing a Technical course in correspondence, I have my exams coming up next week. Certainly, I require to take off from work during the days of my exams. The exam is scheduled from 24th of November to 30th of November.
With respect to the date schedule of my exams as already mentioned above, it is at a stretch of one week. It starts on coming Monday till the end of the week. Therefore I require to take one week off from work.
While I am away from duty, I will assure you that all the work will be covered by my colleague whom I would train with the necessary skills required for the task. Also I would be available on phone anytime between 5:00 p.m. to 10:00 p.m. in the next week.
Looking forward for your favorable response.
Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Manjusha C Nair
- Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
- By punishing murderer with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committingmurder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderer.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include a 61
- Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?Give reasons for your answer and include relevant example from your own knowledge 61
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of adults compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- By punishing murderer with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committingmurder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderer.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include a 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
...ming up next week. Certainly, I require to take off from work during the days of my exa...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 160, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...coming Monday till the end of the week. Therefore I require to take one week off from wor...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 180, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
...he end of the week. Therefore I require to take one week off from work. While I am a...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 164, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...necessary skills required for the task. Also I would be available on phone anytime b...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, therefore, while, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43888888889 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.525053477 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594444444444 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2261073776 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5833333333 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264027484916 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096739214789 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770309671713 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140126632827 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573816449371 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.