You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this,
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Explain why you want to take time off work
Give details of the amount of time you need
Suggest how your work would be covered while you are away.
I am writing to ask for holidays. My name is Arfa Jabeen, the pharmacist of quality control department. I have to attend a medical convention about the contagious covid-19, in Chicago, US.
Let me explain my situation in detail. The medical authorities are concerned about the outbreak of this infection, it killed thousands of people by attacking on immune system and ultimately cause lung failure. The conference is for five days but I need 9 days off because the flights from Pakistan to Chicago are not matching up with meeting. So, I have to go 2 days before and come back 2 days after the convention.
My work is to test the final packaging of medicine and in my absence, my junior pharmacist will carry out my work. He will take the medicine from quality assurance to quality control and than handover to the marketing department.
Waiting for you consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Arfa Jabeen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...uality assurance to quality control and than handover to the marketing department. ...
^^^^
Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion. Yours sincerely, Arfa Jabeen
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96103896104 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8659545348 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662337662338 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8939982 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4545454545 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149976067842 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567318367927 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488858949471 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858247024734 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454517038303 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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