You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend.
In your letter
Explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
I am writing this letter to inform you that, I recently shifted to another house in downtown Toronto, because the house in which I had lived for past 2 years became noisy from when the new neighbours moved in. And the area is becoming crowded with a lot of shopping plazas and it is also the reason for heavy noises in this area.
But, this house is silent because all the people that lived around are working and does not have time to make noises in the night. The house has 4 bedrooms, a kitchen, a study, and most interestingly a basement storeroom so, I can keep unnecessary things in the store. One of my concern is diminished as the heating system is far better than the previous house. Its living room is big enough to throw a party and have a garden with vibrant flowers and it's best for my children to play in the garden in the evening.
I am afraid, if, you have some time to come to my place and see the house, also give me some suggestions to decorate further.
Waiting for your reply.
Yours faithfully,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39790575916 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32715298565 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638743455497 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2714998176 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176041995806 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703738320065 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573263155982 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09848934241 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281661830997 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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