It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
Money can be a source of conflict not just in friends but relatives and so on. How much it destroys one’s relationship that is a question? Well, I strongly concur to this statement. In this essay, I will write the causes or factors that make the bridge fall of any connection or as I particularly say, mate.
First of all, the trust will be drastically affected. For example, one day a call came on my husband’s phone and the caller tell his grievances and hardships because, on monetary condition of his family, he wants to start a small business and for this, he needs some money. My husband agreed unhesitatingly and set the time and duration of money lending. It was six months due to for payback and my husband transferred around 300K to his account to get his life going and to meet his family ends. According to some circumstances my husband need some money for his travel expenses but he keeps extending due date and after a long time just give 50K. Who was this guy? This was my husband a long time friend. That’s how a friend loses his trust in his best friend and this anecdote lose a friendship.
Secondly, once you get a loan from a friend than an unnecessary dialogue of your spending habit will arise. For instance, he will ask you what is your mode of travel and if you have your own car, he might think you can spend lavishly and don’t have a sense of saving money. Moreover, what if he doesn’t have money and not able to tell you. In both cases, your correspondence to each other effects bitterly and both friends will grow a grudge in their heart.
In conclusion, posing circumstances will take your friendship up to a level of rage, anger, bitterness, lost of trust and an awkward feeling of resentment may experience between friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58490566038 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63561036422 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581761006289 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9747976231 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7647058824 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135747538153 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451180601433 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444852409128 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791056196094 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491441260964 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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