You are working in giant company which does financial or other items help to the different group of local community. Write to your manager about some group you want to provide help next year.
Describe a group.
What help do the group need.
What kind of help you expect to provide.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this to request for financial help to one of our local rehabilitation centre as part of red-cross volunteer support.
This year we have extended our financial aid to ZPH school, Hyderabad.As part of the voluntary program we all visited the school, spend our quality time with the school pupil. We have provided some stationary to the students along with scholarships and also provided significant amount for school refurbishment. We've received great accolades from the local community as well as from the school management.
I'm pleading your firm support for the rehabilitation centre located near Madhapur next year. This organization works for the well being of local community, it is providing physical, social and emotional balance to the underprivileged people. It is providing accommodation to the deprived and destitute children also educating them. I've been part of this charity from 2 years, they were running out of funds.
Could you please allocate our voluntary budget to rehabilitation centre next year. At least six months they need not look back with our financial aid.In addition to this, I'm planning to request our colleagues to extend their helping hand in terms of money, books, toys and clothes to this organization.
I am expecting your kind consideration regarding this matter, looking forward for you reply.
yours sincerely,
Madhavi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tter, looking forward for you reply. yours sincerely, Madhavi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, well, at least, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38812785388 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97938819715 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634703196347 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8648172563 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139042727028 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522328840417 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031929921791 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837665509863 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275829709903 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 8.71597938144 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.