You are working in giant company which does financial or other items help to the different group of local community. Write to your manager about some group you want to provide help next year.
Describe a group.
What help do the group need.
What kind of help you expect to provide.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this epistle to ask for financial help and support for a children welfare group “The Buddies”. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate "The Buddies" is a non-government organization which provides socioeconomic support to orphans in the local community. Additionally, they also run an old age house for elderly people who are unable to support themselves financially. Apart from the financial support to adolescents the organization also help them to get integrated into the society.
Although the group is working in myriads of ways to help the local community however lately their financial situation is not good as some of their financiers have backed out, therefore, they require immediate monetary support so that they can continue to work for this noble cause. Since our company provides financial support to such groups under the corporate social responsibility initiative thus I would like to request you to consider them for such help if possible. Moreover, I would need your permission as I plan to hold a charity event on our campus so that employees can contribute cash, used clothes and utensils which can be used to support the group from our end.
Hence I look forward to your approval and support.
Yours sincerely
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this epistle to ask for fin...
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Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
... ask for financial help and support for a children welfare group 'The Buddies'. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ed to support the group from our end. Hence I look forward to your approval and sup...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... approval and support. Yours sincerely Said
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23671497585 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97796994242 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642512077295 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.349792597 44.8134815571 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248582044357 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853069844751 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692018264913 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12774029776 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811179055193 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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