You are working overseas in an international company. You traveled back to your home country without informing your office friends. Write a apology letter to these friends
-apologize to yo friends
-explain the situation
-what you enjoyed most working with them
Dear Friends,
Hope you all are dong well. I'm writing to convey about my sudden move back to my native place. I am extremely sorry for conveying the message so late, but the circumstances was not in my control.
It was the wonderful experience to work with you all. I have learnt many useful things and collected many gems called friends from this organisation. You all have special place in my heart which can not be expressed in words.
Unfortunately, there is a sudden health problem diagnosed in my son. He is only 5 years old and living with my wife in India. The problem is that he is suffering from mental disease which slow downs the mental growth and requires huge care and attention. As my wife is all alone it was difficult for her to recover emotionally and manage the things alone. She was totally disheartened by the incident, seeing the condition i have to rush back to my nation as early as possible. So I decided to left after paying the security amount and without serving the notice period.
It was really a very good time with you all. I wish I could meet you all before leaving. Needs all is your blessings and prayer.
Your's truly,
Maninder kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'donged'.
Suggestion: donged
Dear Friends, Hope you all are dong well. Im writing to convey about my sud...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...Friends, Hope you all are dong well. Im writing to convey about my sudden move ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58962264151 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50184606102 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63679245283 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8275643282 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.8125 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149881885365 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563609760645 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548947378403 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947290901028 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521894759664 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.45 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.