You are writing your first letter to a pen pal.
Describe your previous studies and work experience, your current activities, hobbies and interests.
Tell your pen pal that you will be visiting him/her.
Start your letter with dear..
Dear Grace,
Hi, I hope you are doing fine. I already finished my studies in Commerce at Princeton University in America.
Well I just got accepted with my job application last month. I have already started working in Silicon Valley. Apple Inc. just gave me a wonderful job being a Marketing Supervisor which would also greatly enhance may interpersonal and communication skills. If it is my rest day I will go to the park and do some exercise as well as play catch with my dog Bolt. I am also doing some grocery to buy food and do the laundry. What interest me is that the company is giving us a lot of perks like leeway in the afternoon if we want to take a power nap and vacation leaves incentive as well as seminars for career growth which would greatly give me a positive edge in my other skills.
If it is ok with you, I would like to visit you in the Philippines on March. We could go to some of the tourist destinations there in your country. You can send me an email or you can give me a call. So that I would get notify if your okay with my plan.
I look forward seeing you.
Best Wishes,
Bill
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...he Philippines on March. We could go to some of the tourist destinations there in your coun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27230046948 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45386804933 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62441314554 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6921331051 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152486499206 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531034084592 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520726562222 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973021933993 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778636010803 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.