It is important for children to act independently and make decisions by themselves. Do you agree or disagree
In theses days, most of the younglings are being are self-reliant when it comes to decision-making. Which have a lot of positive effect on the well-being of a person that is why I agree to this notion.
To start with, raising a child is one of the most difficult job for the parents. They are teaching them right way to decide whether it is good or bad. Most of the guardians today are giving children leeway to decide on their own. For example, in United States of America some of the young adults their when they reach the age of 18 they would find a job and rent their own apartment. This will have a beneficial effect on how they would grow they would be a responsible person as well as being a perceptive person when it comes to their judgement.
Moreover, youngsters can also learn the value of time management. In the sense that they could plan and manage their efficiently and productively to finish their job responsibilities and chores at home. Another is that they could budget their finances proficiently in terms of their daily expenditures. This is one of the most important aspect why parents are letting their child to work and live far away from them. To train themselves to become a responsible and wise person when they grow up.
In summary, I equivocally agree that children should be given a chance to act independently in terms of their decision making. So that they could prepare themselves when time comes that they would start their own family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...or example, in United States of America some of the young adults their when they reach the ...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ntly in terms of their decision making. So that they could prepare themselves when time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in summary, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70479089344 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521072796935 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6700391724 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0834166617784 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356080391146 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608696030604 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675221047933 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508603263705 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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