you borrowed some books from your school/college library. unfortunately, you have to go away to visit sick relative and can not return the books in time.
write a letter to the library and explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.
Dear sir,
I am Trupti Bhanderi study in F.Y.Bcom of self-finance stream. My library No. is 135. I borrowed 2 books, first is Business management and second is Company law as on 1st August, 2018. I write this letter to apologies you that I was not able to return this books on time.
As per the rule I have to return this books within 5 days, but on the 3rd August, 2018 my grandmother had a heart attack. So I have to leave immediately to visit her at my village. Because of this I could not return the books on time.
That books I get carry with me to refer at free time, so I request you to extent my due date for deposit of books and when I will be back I pay late deposit fees as per requirement.
I hope you accept my request for an extension of due date of deposit.
Your’s faithfully,
Trupti bhanderi.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-08-03 | trupti mavani | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am Trupti B...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am Trupti Bhanderi study ...
^^^
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Bcom
... I am Trupti Bhanderi study in F.Y.Bcom of self-finance stream. My library No. ...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'August 2018'.
Suggestion: August 2018
...ent and second is Company law as on 1st August, 2018. I write this letter to apologies you t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t able to return this books on time. As per the rule I have to return this bo...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'August 2018'.
Suggestion: August 2018
...his books within 5 days, but on the 3rd August, 2018 my grandmother had a heart attack. So I...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...immediately to visit her at my village. Because of this I could not return the books on...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... could not return the books on time. That books I get carry with me to refer ...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ate deposit fees as per requirement. I hope you accept my request for an exte...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 683.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32278481013 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51006625868 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8368999812 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207131251184 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790574460278 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060360352688 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106218684756 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385034543998 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.