You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you offer the ticket to your friend.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:•Explain detailed the concert.•Why you are unable to go•How can your friend receive the ticket.

Dear John,
I hope you are well. I am writing to offer you a ticket to a music concert which I am unable to go.

You remember I told you I'm going to attend a concert on Saturday by an up-coming singer and guitarist. The singer is new but you will be amazed by his guitar playing skills. The concert starts at 7:00 PM, Moreover, the venue is the dream cafe which adds more fun due to its great ambience.

The reason why I'm offering you the tickets is that I have an interview on the same day which is unavoidable. As you know I want to switch my jobs badly so I can't miss the interview.

If you are interested in going to the concert then call my brother, he is also attending and will pick you up on the way. Just be ready by 6 PM as you know there will be traffic due to the weekend.

I hope you can make it and enjoy the concert.

See you soon!
Becky

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 25, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...nable to go. You remember I told you Im going to attend a concert on Saturday b...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...more fun due to its great ambience. The reason why Im offering you the tickets ...
^^^
Line 6, column 16, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... its great ambience. The reason why Im offering you the tickets is that I have...
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Line 6, column 158, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...now I want to switch my jobs badly so I cant miss the interview. If you are inter...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.03468208092 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20368473301 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606936416185 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1015949245 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4545454545 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345816584804 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146175150317 0.0766984524023 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788675370477 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215267248084 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669304469187 0.0580467560999 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.8 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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