You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you want to offer the ticket to your friend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
explain the concert
why you are unable to go
how can your friend receive the ticket.
Dear Poonam,
How are you? hope your college is going well. It's been a while since we last talked as exams are around. Actually, i have a muisic concert ticket , if you are interested to go and get a little break from your hectic schedule.
Like every year, city community centre has organised a music concert this year too znd guess who the performers are? It's Arijit singh and neha kakkar. I am well aware, you are a great fan of both.Moverover, the concert is on this saturday evening and you don't have to worry to get up early the next day.
I know you might be wondering why am i not going. The thing is that, yesturday i got slipped from stairs and got swelling on my right foot. Doctor has recommended complete bed rest for a week. I really felt disheartened as you know i am a big fan too. Anyway ,you don't have any problem collecting the ticket from my house, i suppose. Let me know your plans soon.
See you soon.
with love
sukhman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
Dear Poonam, How are you? hope your college is going well. Its been a ...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...Actually, i have a muisic concert ticket , if you are interested to go and get a l...
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Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moverover
...well aware, you are a great fan of both.Moverover, the concert is on this saturday evenin...
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Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ert is on this saturday evening and you dont have to worry to get up early the next...
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Line 4, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is on this saturday evening and you dont have to worry to get up early the next d...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...not going. The thing is that, yesturday i got slipped from stairs and got swellin...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I really felt disheartened as you know i am a big fan too. Anyway ,you dont hav...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...felt disheartened as you know i am a big fan too. Anyway ,you dont have any probl...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... as you know i am a big fan too. Anyway ,you dont have any problem collecting the...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...u know i am a big fan too. Anyway ,you dont have any problem collecting the ticket ...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...em collecting the ticket from my house, i suppose. Let me know your plans soon. ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...know your plans soon. See you soon. with love sukhman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, if, really, so, well, while, i suppose, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36516853933 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36438943075 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691011235955 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2781440596 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.8 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8666666667 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277185265347 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862994926318 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769241794499 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183427163948 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755525212404 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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