You bought a TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it did not work properly. You called the customer service to report the problem but I have not receive any help.
Write a letter to the company and in the letter:
- Introduce yourself
- explain the problem
- and state what action you would like from the company
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing with regard to the issue with the TV I purchased from your company.
I am a husband living with my wife and two lovely kids. My beloved wife were attracted by the extraordinary design of the TV at a shopping mall not far away from our home. So we ordered it online the same day after we arrived at home.
We were so happy to receive the TV delivered to our home and we turned it on immediately to test the functionalities according to the instructions came with the TV. However, after strictly following the guidance, I still could not play the video from my USB drive with the TV. I had a phone call with the customer service to report the issue. However, till now I haven't received any response yet.
Since the TV is still within warranty - two years according to the contract and we haven't had any intension to deliberately break it, I sincerely would like to request you help me solve this issue as soon as possible.
I am looking forward to your response.
Yours faithfully
Jeff
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| 2018-10-07 | jeffreyjinfeng | 73 | view |
| 2018-10-07 | jeffreyjinfeng | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 364, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...o report the issue. However, till now I havent received any response yet. Since the...
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Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... years according to the contract and we havent had any intension to deliberately break...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, still, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56451612903 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64524866536 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4318880688 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1818181818 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130537794923 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442141904533 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419358408179 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612941790218 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453673761496 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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