You forgot an item of clothing at the hotel where you stayed recently. Write a letter to the hotel manager.
In your letter, you should tell:
when you stayed and in what room
describe the item you left behind
what you would like the manager to do about it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in connection to a piece of jacket I left in Room 424 of your hotel on Sunday, 6th March. I stayed there for the whole weekend. When I packed my luggage I accidently forgot the jacket in the closet in the room and I didn’t realize that until I returned home last night.
It is a North Face jacket with blue color and medium size, and it is stuffed with duck down feather. It has a small black mark at the back which is left by a mark pen by accident and it looks a bit dirty as I worn it outside while it was snowing during the weekend, therefore I think it should be fairly easy to recognize.
I would like you to help me find my jacket and leave it at the reception desk in the main lobby. And then I will find some time to come and pick it up. Since I am not living close to your hotel, I may not be able to come very soon. I will visit the village adjacent to your hotel next weekend and I want to go and pick up my jacket on that Saturday afternoon. Please let the receptionist know about this in ahead.
Please help me with this matter. I really appreciate it.
Yours sincerely,
Jerry Wang
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it should be fairly easy to recognize. I would like you to help me find my jack...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, really, so, then, therefore, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.10526315789 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17641107296 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609649122807 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8307883079 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160671192184 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447658793734 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487329852414 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732297148005 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060775854559 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.26 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.