\You forgot something important on the bus you traveled on. Write a letter to the bus company and say
- Describe what you are looking for.
- You phoned the company before, but their response didn’t help you (explain why).
- What do you want the manager to do about it?
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this epistle in reference to inform you of an incident in which I forgot my bag on a bus while travelling. Let me explain the situation.
To elucidate I boarded the bus number XG4567 from City bus station towards Downtown day before yesterday around 7 pm. When I reached my home I suddenly realized that I had forgotten my rucksack bag which was kept in the overhead storage box of the bus. The bag was yellow in colour with several travel stickers on it and contains my car insurance documents. Without wasting any time I immediately called your bus company customer services representative and provided him with the necessary information to which he assured me a quick resolution within a day but it has been a few days now and no one has contacted me.
Hence I would request you to look into this matter and help me to locate my bag as the documents inside the bag are fairly important. In case you are able to find the bag then please give a call on my cell number I will come and collect the bag from your office.
I look forward to your immediate support.
Yours Sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. I am writing th...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ntown day before yesterday around 7 pm. When I reached my home I suddenly realized t...
^^^^
Line 4, column 266, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: yellow
...ead storage box of the bus. The bag was yellow in colour with several travel stickers on it and ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ays now and no one has contacted me. Hence I would request you to look into this m...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our immediate support. Yours Sincerely Ben
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, look, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47846889952 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55075535411 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650717703349 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7001704465 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0909090909 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195501534452 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761939216251 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069880303691 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128301297329 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958998221322 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.