You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.

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You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.

Dear Sir/Ma’am,

I am writing to bring your attention to an infamous restaurant in Karachi in I.I Chundrigar Road, near Habib Bank Plaza and would be grateful if you could publish about it in your newspaper so that more people would come to know and visit the restaurant.

Karachi is the biggest hub of food streets and variety of foods with different tastes can be found here but very few restaurants are able to draw people’s attention and convince them to visit again. CHICKEN COTTAGE restaurant is one of them. Italian, continental, Chinese, Japanese, Pakistani, Indian and Turkish foods were offered over there. I preferred to go for Japanese Sushi. It was the best Sushi I have ever had and its sauce was also perfect in taste. I am inspired by their perfect ambience with soft music being played live on a small stage. There was proper coordination between the staff members for providing best service to the customers and there was no delay in any servings.

I am grateful to you for giving time reading this letter. Looking forward for your response.

Yours faithfully

XYZ

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... an infamous restaurant in Karachi in I.I Chundrigar Road, near Habib Bank Plaza ...
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Line 5, column 619, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'providing the best'.
Suggestion: providing the best
...rdination between the staff members for providing best service to the customers and there was ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 699, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and there was no delay in any servings. I am grateful to you for giving time rea...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d for your response. Yours faithfully XYZ
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96774193548 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67584269335 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.720430107527 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.0805358412 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184568026481 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593672539175 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518131691959 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931483736297 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601601763788 0.0580467560999 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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