You had just missed a friend’s part, write a letter apologising and stating
reasons why you couldn’t attend the party. Ask how fun it was.
Dear John,
Thank you so much for inviting me to your party. It was very generous of you to put me up at your place for your party. I would have loved to come at your occasion, but unfortunately due to my hectic work schedule, I was unable to arrive at your party.
We have just received an exciting project for our company and my boss has made me the leader of our software development team. Because of work overload, we often have to work overnight. I could not even celebrate my anniversary since I was busy with my job. As deadline for finishing the project is approaching fast, we must put extra efforts to make our project successful.
Would you be kind enough to forgive me for not making it to your party? I hope your party was a blast! I guess your cousin jimmy had cracked some jokes which made everyone laugh at the party. I Promise you whenever I will get free time, I will visit you in person to hear the exciting details of your party.
I can’t wait to hear a reply from you.
Your sincerely,
Rafsun
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, Thank you so much for inviting me to you...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...which made everyone laugh at the party. I Promise you whenever I will get free ti...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the exciting details of your party. I can't wait to hear a reply from yo...
^
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ar a reply from you. Your sincerely, Rafsun
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4375 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40313651384 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598958333333 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1243640559 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151367179554 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631094586985 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557988747292 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113643770234 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575305435685 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.