You have applied for a job at two different companies. Both have decided to choose you. Write a letter to decline one of the job offers. In your letter, apologize for not being able to accept that position and also your circumstances for turning them down.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in response to your offer to work as a Creative Art Director at your esteemed agency. I am afraid, I shall not be able to accept it.
Unfortunately, I have decided to take up another job opportunity coming my way. Little did I know of my chances of landing a better job profile at another popular advertising firm. A creative opportunity to lead a multi-regional team has been my dream and has finally manifested for me, into a reality.
It truly was a dilemma, to choose between an enriching experience of being a part of your organization or pursuing my professional aspiration of acquiring a job title of a 'National Creative Director'. One of the other main reasons to decline this offer is the long hours of commuting. I would like to spend more time with my family.
I apologize for the convenience, and sincerely want to thank you for considering me as a deserving candidate for the position offered. I admire your work environment and I truly appreciate your quick and favorable response. I wish you and your company good luck in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Kathy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in response to ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ing candidate for the position offered. I admire your work environment and I trul...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...iate your quick and favorable response. I wish you and your company good luck in ...
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Line 8, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d your company good luck in the future. Yours sincerely, Kathy
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Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uck in the future. Yours sincerely, Kathy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75897435897 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98713436744 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1617777195 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338454463368 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099153950852 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607325821795 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171199272066 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709536371449 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.