You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter
>describe the work you have been doing
>explain why you can no longer do this work
> recommend another person who is interested in the work
Write at least 150 words.
Dear xyz,
I am writing this in reference to my interest of changing my work.
As you know, it has been quite a long time of around 3.5 years that i have been working in SCI project. I have been doing functional testing of the client application and ensuring there are no defects in production. Besides this i have also been working on automation scripts which are used for regression testing.
I have been doing this same kind of work for quite some time and i don't see my work challenging now. As I inspire to get skill of other technologies I wanted to move to other project where I can enhance my skills. Though the work is good in current project, I request you to release me from this work.
To replace me, I can suggest you one of friend who is very much interested in this work. As he is on bench and is ready to learn up new things I believe he can easily adopt in the work of this project.
Yours faithfully,
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... kind of work for quite some time and i dont see my work challenging now. As I inspi...
^^^^
Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and i dont see my work challenging now. As I inspire to get skill of other technol...
^^
Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to up'
Suggestion: to up
...As he is on bench and is ready to learn up new things I believe he can easily adop...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, so, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31073446328 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42264208579 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598870056497 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4668411861 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.3 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411355972565 0.216113520407 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160905590338 0.0766984524023 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10154713805 0.0603063233224 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227259641991 0.12726935374 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123342732376 0.0580467560999 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.