You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter
>describe the work you have been doing
>explain why you can no longer do this work
> recommend another person who is interested in the work
Dear Mr David,
I am writing this letter to regretfully inform you that I am no longer available to assist in voluntary administration work. I was basically working as an administrator. I undertook general duties which were answering incoming phone calls, and providing administrative support to our counsellor as well as organizing indoor events.
I have been privileged to work with the pioneers at your revered charity, but the primary cause for leaving is that I have accepted an attractive job offer. Unfortunately, the workplace in the metropolis, so that I have to reside there with my family in order to commute easily between home and work.
Hence, I would like to recommend a friend of mine who demonstrated his solicitude towards this voluntary work because he wishes to fulfil his moral obligation and contribute toward our community so that I will be much obliged if you consider him. Eventually, I greatly appreciate the time I spent there.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Peter John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... basically working as an administrator. I undertook general duties which were ans...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...as well as organizing indoor events. I have been privileged to work with the p...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14792899408 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0643461667 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.733727810651 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4984020483 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305558239099 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978040889366 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658546448343 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147550618162 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484063219997 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.