You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in and has been making a lot of noise, which disturbs you.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter:
explain the situation
describe why it bothers you
suggest a solution
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear __________,
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to complain about a new tenant in Room 147. He keeps making noise, which makes me extremely annoyed.
Let me explain in more detail. Since he moved in last month, he has had parties with his friends until midnight at least three or four times a week. During the parties, they often play loud music and sing karaoke nosily. Although I have talked to him about these problems for several times, nothing has improved / changed.
Living in a quiet environment is quite important to me because I have to concentrate on doing assignments on a daily basis and also preparing for exams. More importantly, it is difficult for me to fall asleep, and sometimes the noise from his room wakes me up in the middle of the night. Therefore, I usually feel exhausted and have a headache when getting up the next morning.
I would appreciate if you could have a serious conversation with him / could speak to him about the annoyance he has caused. Also, I recommend that you consider setting a strict fine for those who make noise or break any other regulations of the building.
Thank you very much for your consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Dat Tran
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to complain about a new ten...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69014084507 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59035111038 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694835680751 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9808422589 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8461538462 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197889620865 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618079588317 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511862458837 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111927210918 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555934390567 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.