You have been offered a job overseas that you applied for. Write a letter to your friend who already knows about that job as well
- tell what kind of job is it
- explain why you applied for this job
- ask your friend about the country
Dear John,
hope you and your family are well. my apologies for not being in touch; but making up for it via this letter. I am glad to pen down to write that I got a job offer from an overseas company.
As you were already aware of the occupation which I had applied for. The work position is Fuel engineer. Moreover, I need to track the measurements of petrol, diesel, and gas. It's a challenging and tricky job to enhance my skills related to my field.
I have chosen petroleum as my career, I believe this employment suited for me. I am very passionate about to work with this Concern. Therefore, I registered for this project.
you have already been into this area and familiar with the few places. could you please share the information against weather, kind of clothes to wear, the culture of the country?
I hope this letter finds you safe and sound. Do get back to me, whenever you get a chance. Talk to you soon.
Thanks,
Aarthi.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, hope you and your family are well. my ap...
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Suggestion: My
...n, hope you and your family are well. my apologies for not being in touch; but m...
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Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t a job offer from an overseas company. As you were already aware of the occupat...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...easurements of petrol, diesel, and gas. Its a challenging and tricky job to enhance...
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Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erefore, I registered for this project. you have already been into this area and...
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Suggestion: You
...ore, I registered for this project. you have already been into this area and fa...
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Suggestion: Could
... area and familiar with the few places. could you please share the information agains...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...es to wear, the culture of the country? I hope this letter finds you safe and so...
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Line 8, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a chance. Talk to you soon. Thanks, Aarthi.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, therefore, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49132947977 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43416437469 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670520231214 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.622023622 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.8 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.5333333333 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391120793006 0.216113520407 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993216305317 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607182779078 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188325602556 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05766213191 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.58 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.