You have completed the course and received a certificate but you lost it on the way back Write a letter to the Principal of the college In your letter you should tell how you lost the certificate why you need it what you expect the principal to do

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You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college.

In your letter, you should tell:
how you lost the certificate
why you need it
what you expect the principal to do.

Submitted by enassar on Wed, 07/15/2020 - 06:42

Dear Principal John,

I am writing to than you for the effort that you made it to me, in order to collect my certificate early. But unfortunately, the paper is lost.
On my wat back home, the train stopped at the second station, to pick up some passengers, suddenly a fist fight happened between two man, a thief exploit this moment and stole my hand bag, where all my documents, cards addition to this certificate where gone.
However, as I told you previously that this certificate is important, where I am applying to continue my Master Degree overseas, the university requested for it urgently, so I can apply for a scholarship earlier and book a place for the next semester.
I would like from your side, if you can prepare a new certificate with two original copies, signed by you, in order to send it as soon as possible to the university. Please of is it possible to be done by the end of this week, to collect it from your office. I will send you another email with all the details needed.
Thank you for your consideration and time, waiting for your reply soon.

Regards

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...appened between two man, a thief exploit this moment and stole my hand bag, where...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57653061224 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66587857558 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617346938776 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.2019910912 44.8134815571 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.125 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286213499858 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135905411422 0.0766984524023 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097652969451 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150880846975 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980645165965 0.0580467560999 169% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...appened between two man, a thief exploit this moment and stole my hand bag, where...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57653061224 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66587857558 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617346938776 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.2019910912 44.8134815571 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.125 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286213499858 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135905411422 0.0766984524023 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097652969451 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150880846975 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980645165965 0.0580467560999 169% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.