You have a Facebook friend living and he/she is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter,
describe a news story in your country
explain why people are interested in it
say how the story personally relates to you
Dear James,
I hope you will find this letter in radiant health and I am writing this letter to explain you a prominent news story of my nation.
I want to share a recent incident in which 42 soldiers were martyred by a suicide bomber in Kashmir. However, it was an egregious situation for all the citizens of India. Soldiers were patrolling and suddenly, a terrorist came with a car full of explosive and blasted it.
It was a shocking news for every citizen of India because it is the issue of national security. In addition to that, people also want to take revenge with the responsible terrorists who have committed a heinous crime. People are protesting against the government and compelling it to take some profound steps.
This incident affected me a lot because being an Indian, I would not tolerate the anti-humanity act. Moreover, one of my friend's father was also killed in this attack who was a major in Indian army. So, I am very sad due to this wicked act.
I hope, it will help you in your assignment and give my regards to uncle and aunt.
Best regards,
Mohit
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-01 | aditithakker | 78 | view |
| 2019-10-21 | mansoureh | 73 | view |
| 2019-10-16 | Tolik | 89 | view |
| 2019-09-17 | manas | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-21 | DoaaOkaila | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'shocking news'.
Suggestion: shocking news
... of explosive and blasted it. It was a shocking news for every citizen of India because it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64948453608 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5731099642 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634020618557 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9517865958 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1666666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129502857967 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356153025559 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490826229255 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073604858822 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587665099215 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.