You have finished a course. Write a letter to the course organizer to give your
feedback. In your letter include:
▪ the details of the course
▪ what you enjoyed during the course
▪ any suggestions you would have
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
This is Aidin Farughi. I am writing to you to inform you about my opinions on one of your courses based on my experience. I have just finished the rotary systems course. Pupils were educated about differences between system and how to operate each one by Dr. Jafarzade. It took place at one of your institute’s branches in Mashhad and was held for one week, from june 2nd till 9th.
What I loved most about the course is that it was a hand on type. Each trainee had a chance to try the systems in practice while being supervised by a professional. From my point of view, knowledge got by experience is far better than what is learned simply by slides and speeches.
I believe there are some actions that could be taken to even better up the course. First, you can provide patients in order to make practice on an actual tooth in the oral cavity rather than a doll with some extracted animal teeth. Second, it would be best to add to the supervised practices’ sessions. As I told, I am fond of these sessions.
I hope you find my letter helpful.
Yours Truly.
A.Farughi
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-01-22 | Aidin_1805 | 93 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ary systems course. Pupils were educated about differences between system and how...
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Line 12, column 2, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Farughi
...d my letter helpful. Yours Truly. A.Farughi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55223880597 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62175365697 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0066182718 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3846153846 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206295887448 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642755445129 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751319198131 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122167314401 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583618480526 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.