Dear Thomas,
It's been a long time since I last wrote to you. Hope you are doing great. I've been planning to come to Canada to pursue a master's degree in Mechanical Engineering from the University of Toronto, for the past one month.
You already know that, I have been working as a consultant engineer in the automotive industry for the past two years. Do you remember how much you persuaded me to go for higher studies after we had completed our Bachelor's degree? Recently, I felt stuck in my career and thought that studying abroad would open numerous paths to climb up the career ladder.
I need your immediate guidance to get in touch with the University admission office. Can you let me know the feasible ways to contact them? It would be great if you could inquire the officials regarding fees, scholarships, facilities and co-curricular activities and revert back to me.
I am curious to meet you soon.
Warm wishes
Prasanth G
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Thomas, Its been a long time since I last wrote ...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...wrote to you. Hope you are doing great. Ive been planning to come to Canada to purs...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81097560976 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64177840835 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.737804878049 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7872842049 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7272727273 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348003656856 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122739835816 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874715576548 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198350411052 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597493890097 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.