You have gained admission in a prestigious college. Now you have to arrange for the accommodation. Write a letter to the college stating your likes and dislikes in the choice of food and accommodation.
Dear Sir/Madame,
my name is David lung, I have just been accepted as a student at your college. my student number is g55wp.
I would like to give you some descriptions of my preferences in my accommodation, I would arrive on April 22nd and. As per medical conditions, I would need a room next to the bathrooms; also I really like a passive environment so I would prefer a room in a quiet area if it is possible due to I do not resist the noise.
I do not have a specific diet, however, I would prefer to consume food low in sugars and low in saturated fats. this is not part of my food preferences but I really will need a coffee dispenser or if I have access to use an automatic water boiler would be perfect, I could make my own coffee.
I look forward to hearing from you.
your faithfully,
David lung
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... I look forward to hearing from you. your faithfully, David lung
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 676.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36129032258 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7044034697 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61935483871 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7812422225 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153768911243 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668281144131 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405287675457 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896943349275 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00432077648357 0.0580467560999 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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